Somehow i was surviving through the dejection,
My dismal mind was facing the rejection.
Within me a sorrow prevailed.
And all the happiness desolated my mind;
The failure stressed me out.
The prolonged dissatisfaction made my feelings go bitter,
In search of an escape
I went up to my building's terrace
And felt the tender silence.
The full moon prettily covered in a bright silver foil
Appeared spectacular and more bigger than usual,
Emitting rays of hope
Which devoured the death-like-silence in my mind.
The rays transferred sudden joy and my heart galloped!
The peaceful autumn breeze held my heart at high.
I took a deep breath, looked up and gave a confident smile.
The radiant western star asked me to carry faith in my heart.
I gathered up my courage to celebrate the failure,
My spirit gleamed up in the darkness to welcome my forthcoming success.
And now I TRUST MYSELF, the God within me who creates. :)
My dismal mind was facing the rejection.
Within me a sorrow prevailed.
And all the happiness desolated my mind;
The failure stressed me out.
The prolonged dissatisfaction made my feelings go bitter,
In search of an escape
I went up to my building's terrace
And felt the tender silence.
The full moon prettily covered in a bright silver foil
Appeared spectacular and more bigger than usual,
Emitting rays of hope
Which devoured the death-like-silence in my mind.
The rays transferred sudden joy and my heart galloped!
The peaceful autumn breeze held my heart at high.
I took a deep breath, looked up and gave a confident smile.
The radiant western star asked me to carry faith in my heart.
I gathered up my courage to celebrate the failure,
My spirit gleamed up in the darkness to welcome my forthcoming success.
And now I TRUST MYSELF, the God within me who creates. :)
you delineated it really well. :)
ReplyDeleteraginee harlalka.
Wonderful work Bernashree.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery of the Western star elevated its stature.=).
Keep enlightening us with your beautiful thoughts always.
raginee@ thanks babie! :)
ReplyDeletethe unknown traveller@ thanks for the appreciation.. :)
good work barnashree....!!! i loved it :) great portrayal of Ur emotions...
ReplyDeletethank u subha... :)
ReplyDelete"In search of an escape
ReplyDeleteI went up to my building's terrace"
you remind me of so many memories. beautifully written.
yes... the terrace is very peaceful in the nights. :)
ReplyDeleteWell done Barnashree. I like your choice of words! Good Luck.
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